作业帮针对sat1 1月写作考题的Should we treat people according to what they are capable of achieving instead of what they actually have done?我想问下这个开头可不可以：We admire giant figures exclusively of what they have done.So on the o
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针对sat1 1月写作考题的Should we treat people according to what they are capable of achieving instead of what they actually have done?我想问下这个开头可不可以：We admire giant figures exclusively of what they have done.So on the o
针对sat1 1月写作考题的
Should we treat people according to what they are capable of achieving instead of what they actually have done?我想问下这个开头可不可以：We admire giant figures exclusively of what they have done.So on the other hand if we put on emphasis on treating people due to their capabilities,we will probably not receive the right sense.From an individual of talents in some fields to one with plenty of accomplishment,one must first overcome a great deal of troubles in order to be regarded by others.So in this sense we should rate people according to their past feat.然后下面的例子段就写名人怎么怎么通过拥有同样能力的人没有的关键因素来成功 说明我们要通过人的过去评价他们.
针对sat1 1月写作考题的Should we treat people according to what they are capable of achieving instead of what they actually have done?我想问下这个开头可不可以：We admire giant figures exclusively of what they have done.So on the o
首先第一二句没有 所以 这种逻辑啊...
完全不能推导出来.
第三句 看了半天 太 chiEng了吧 From...to 通常是时间上的变化.
从第三句看出 你想说的人要经过磨练,逆境才能成功.然后第四句就说 我们要从他们的past feats里估量他们的价值?逻辑非常混杂.SAT注意的是逻辑..
如果要我帮你修改下,我可以想想