雅思 剑五 test3 大作文 Some people support that children should be encouraged to have a sense ofcompetition while some people advocate the spirit of co-operating which is moreuseful should be taught to children.The sense of competition may be

雅思 剑五 test3 大作文 Some people support that children should be encouraged to have a sense ofcompetition while some people advocate the spirit of co-operating which is moreuseful should be taught to children.The sense of competition may be
雅思 剑五 test3 大作文
Some people support that children should be encouraged to have a sense ofcompetition while some people advocate the spirit of co-operating which is moreuseful should be taught to children.
The sense of competition may be a motivation of children's study.Childrenwho are competitive usually more like to study hard without parents' orteachers' press.We all know nowadays,this is a society with manycompetitions.We often can see several young individuals compete for a samejob.And some of them lose not because they are not as good as enough,but theydo not get used to competitions.So the early education of a sense ofcompetition can help children be more self-conscious and adjust the societybetter when they grow up.
At the same time,individuals have to co-operate with someone else nomatter in studying or in working.Especially in many occasions,it isimpossible for one person to complete a task totally by himself.So it isimportant for children to learn co-operating with others,which can benefitthem in their every period of life.In addition,people who have a spirit ofco-operating usually can get along well with other ones and have a goodinterpersonal relationship which can benefit them when they need help.
Overall,to my mind,both the sense of competition and co-operating areneedful for children's education.Children should have a sense of competitionbut cannot be selfish,and a competition without spite is quite a good challengefor …… 因为字数超出了所以完整的内容在图片里面  

雅思 剑五 test3 大作文 Some people support that children should be encouraged to have a sense ofcompetition while some people advocate the spirit of co-operating which is moreuseful should be taught to children.The sense of competition may be
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