英语作文 I first time I.求英语高手帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有语法错误.Everyone

英语作文 I first time I.求英语高手帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有语法错误.Everyone
英语作文 I first time I.求英语高手帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有语法错误.
Everyone

英语作文 I first time I.求英语高手帮忙看一下这篇作文有没有语法错误.Everyone
Everyone has a lot of first times.For example,the first time to ride a bike,the first tiem to cook a meal...I still remember the first time when I learned to ride a bike.I was nervous and scared.I thought it was dangerous,but my father said to me,"you must learn to ride a bike,or you cannot go to the park with us by bike." Then he taught me every day.I fell down again and again.I hurt my arms and legs many times.However,finally,I could ride the bike and I was very happy.

Everyone has his or her first times. For example, the first time to ride a bike, the first time to cook a meal... I still remember the first time when I learned to ride a bike. I was nervous and scar...

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Everyone has his or her first times. For example, the first time to ride a bike, the first time to cook a meal... I still remember the first time when I learned to ride a bike. I was nervous and scared. I thought it was dangerous, but my father told me, "you have to learn to ride a bike, or you can't go to the park with us by bike." Then he helped me day after day, and I fell off the bike again and again. I hurt my arms and legs many times. However, finally, I could ride the bike freely. How happy I was!

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Everyone has a lot of first times,such as the first time to ride a bike, the first time to cook a meal,etc. I still remember the first time when I learnt to ride a bike. I was nervous and scared. I th...

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Everyone has a lot of first times,such as the first time to ride a bike, the first time to cook a meal,etc. I still remember the first time when I learnt to ride a bike. I was nervous and scared. I thought it was dangerous, but my father said to me, "you must learn to ride a bike, or you cannot go to the park with us by bike." Then he taught me every day. I fell down again and again. My arms and legs got hurt serious. However, ,I could ride the bike finally and I was very happy.

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