今年的大学英语四级作文online shopping我想估一下分,nowadays,with the rapid of the internet,shopping online is becoming a fasion,especially among the young.I believe that many factors contributed to the widespread of online shopping.Fi

今年的大学英语四级作文online shopping我想估一下分,nowadays,with the rapid of the internet,shopping online is becoming a fasion,especially among the young.I believe that many factors contributed to the widespread of online shopping.Fi
今年的大学英语四级作文online shopping我想估一下分,
nowadays,with the rapid of the internet,shopping online is becoming a fasion,especially among the young.
I believe that many factors contributed to the widespread of online shopping.Firstly,it is convenient for people to buy the goods and they don't need to go outside to seach the goods in shops one by one so that save their time.Secondly,the goods sells on the internet is cheaper than in shops,it can save their much money.However,shopping online can also be potentially dangerious.since the buyer and the seller do not need to deal with face-to-face,the quality of the goods can't be guaranteed,and the goods may be damaged during the delively.
From my piont of view ,shopping online is a trend and we should not be prohibited .But we should be careful while using it and the government should be take some measures make it perfect.
顺便帮我看一下这个作文的语法什么的问题,我英语基础不够好

今年的大学英语四级作文online shopping我想估一下分,nowadays,with the rapid of the internet,shopping online is becoming a fasion,especially among the young.I believe that many factors contributed to the widespread of online shopping.Fi
nowadays,with the rapid development of the internet,shopping online is becoming a fashion,especially among the young.
I believe that many factors contributed to the widespread of online shopping.Firstly,it is convenient for people to buy the goods and they don't need to go outside to seach the goods in shops one by one so that it will save their time.Secondly,the goods selled on the internet is cheaper than those in shops,it can save their money.However,shopping online can be potentially dangerous.since the buyer and the seller do not need to deal with the business face-to-face,the quality of the goods can't be guaranteed,and the goods may be damaged during the delivery.
From my piont of view ,shopping online is a trend and we should not be prohibited .But we should be careful while using it and the government should take some measures making it perfect.
上面是修改的作文,单词拼写有点问题,语句有点乱,内容框架还是不错的.
因为不知道具体评分标准,所以不确定能拿到多少分,你对照评分标准,自己打分看看.

很不错啊。。应该能打很高的分数了

以我以前写作业的经历看 保守在10分 在高点可能12左右。都有可能！算不错的了 这个作文。

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