帮我改改这篇英语作文,Giant PandaThe giant panda is China is also one of the world's rare animals.They live only in China.Their skins are black and white,they looks like bears,their limbs are strong.Their bodies are fat,but the temper is mil

帮我改改这篇英语作文,Giant PandaThe giant panda is China is also one of the world's rare animals.They live only in China.Their skins are black and white,they looks like bears,their limbs are strong.Their bodies are fat,but the temper is mil
帮我改改这篇英语作文,
Giant Panda
The giant panda is China is also one of the world's rare animals.They live only in China.Their skins are black and white,they looks like bears,their limbs are strong.Their bodies are fat,but the temper is mild.Their favorite food is bamboos.They will climb trees,swimming,very recruit people love it.But now their only about one thousand number,their number is smaller and smaller
Save the lovely pandas.Let’s try our best to create a better environment for them.

帮我改改这篇英语作文,Giant PandaThe giant panda is China is also one of the world's rare animals.They live only in China.Their skins are black and white,they looks like bears,their limbs are strong.Their bodies are fat,but the temper is mil
Giant Panda
The giant panda is one of China is the world's rare animals. They live only in China. Their skin is black and white, they look like bears, their limbs are strong. Their bodies are fat, but his temper mild. Their favorite food is bamboo. They will climb trees, swim, it is killer. But now they number only 1000, their number is getting smaller and smaller
Save the cute pandas. Let us try to create a better environment for them.

The giant panda in China is also one of the world's rare animals. They live only in China. Their skins are black and white, they look like bears, their limbs are strong. Their bodies are fat, but the ...

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The giant panda in China is also one of the world's rare animals. They live only in China. Their skins are black and white, they look like bears, their limbs are strong. Their bodies are fat, but the temper is mild. Their favourite food is bamboo. They can climb trees, swimming, very recruit people love it. But now the amount of then is only sbout 1000, and the number is getting smaller and smaller.
Save the lovely pandas. Let’s try our best to create a better environment for them.

大概就这样吧。。。如果是要整个文章的主心骨都要改的话。。。把大意说下

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大熊猫
大熊猫不仅是中国而且是世界稀有动物之一。它们只生活在中国。它们 的皮毛是由黑色和白色组成的，看起来像熊。它们四肢发达，身态浑圆，但性情温和。它们最喜欢的食物是竹子。它们会爬树、游泳， 很招人待见。 但是现在总共只有1000多只了，它们的数量越来越少。
救救可爱的大熊猫吧！让我们尽我们的努力为它们创造一个很好的生活环境。...

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大熊猫
大熊猫不仅是中国而且是世界稀有动物之一。它们只生活在中国。它们 的皮毛是由黑色和白色组成的，看起来像熊。它们四肢发达，身态浑圆，但性情温和。它们最喜欢的食物是竹子。它们会爬树、游泳， 很招人待见。 但是现在总共只有1000多只了，它们的数量越来越少。
救救可爱的大熊猫吧！让我们尽我们的努力为它们创造一个很好的生活环境。

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