I still remember how nervously I was on my first day in the new school three year before.I found it how diffcult to follow my teacher in first English class .She spoke in English throughout the class,that was totally different as the lessons I had ta

I still remember how nervously I was on my first day in the new school three year before.I found it how diffcult to follow my teacher in first English class .She spoke in English throughout the class,that was totally different as the lessons I had ta
I still remember how nervously I was on my first day in the new school three year before.I found it how diffcult to follow my teacher in first English class .She spoke in English throughout the class,that was totally different as the lessons I had taken before.In the morning class the next day,my English teacher came to me while she was reading the text aloud.After listeningme for a while,she gave me a big smile and said she likes my voice very much.The smile shone on the whole day and for several day.Thanks to the smile.Ibegan to be confident.

I still remember how nervously I was on my first day in the new school three year before.I found it how diffcult to follow my teacher in first English class .She spoke in English throughout the class,that was totally different as the lessons I had ta
I still remember how (nervously 改为 nervous) I was on my first day in the new school three (year 改为 years) (before 改为 ago).I found it (how去掉,或改成 very) difficult to follow my teacher in （加上the）first English class.She spoke (in 去掉) English throughout the class,(that改为 which) was totally different (as改为 from) the lessons I had taken before.In the morning class the next day,my English teacher came to me while (she改为 I) was reading the text aloud.After listening (加上 to) me for a while,she gave me a big smile and said she (likes 改为 liked) my voice very much.The smile shone (on 去掉) the whole day and for several （day 改为 days）.Thanks to the smile,I began to be confident.
我只能做到上面结果,不知道原文是不是分十行排列,且9个错误1个划勾.也不知道你的输入有没有造成新的错误.希望你能看得懂我的答案.

更正在括号处标明！貌似楼主打字有误，都改了11个了。
I still remember how 【nervous】I was on my first day in the new school three year 【ago】. I found it 【去掉how】 diffcult to follow my teacher in 【加入the】first English class....

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更正在括号处标明！貌似楼主打字有误，都改了11个了。
I still remember how 【nervous】I was on my first day in the new school three year 【ago】. I found it 【去掉how】 diffcult to follow my teacher in 【加入the】first English class. She spoke 【去掉in】 English throughout the class, 【which】was totally different 【from】the lessons I had taken before. In the morning class the next day, my English teacher came to me while【I】was reading the text aloud. After listening 【加入to】me for a while, she gave me a big smile and said she 【liked】my voice very much.The smile shone on the whole day and for several 【days】. Thanks to the smile, I began to be confident.

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同学，我是高二的。我不知道是我错了还是您打错了还是怎么回事，我找到超出十个。nervously-nervous;year-years;before-ago;how去掉；first-the first;that-which;as-from;while she-while I;listening me-listening to me;likes-liked;several day-several days。加油！

I still remember how NERVOUS (nervously) I was on my first day in the new school three yearS AGO (before).I found it SO/VERY (how) diffcult to follow my teacher in MY first English class .She spoke （i...

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I still remember how NERVOUS (nervously) I was on my first day in the new school three yearS AGO (before).I found it SO/VERY (how) diffcult to follow my teacher in MY first English class .She spoke （in） English throughout the class,AND that was totally different FROM (as) the lessons I had taken before.In the morning class the next day,my English teacher came to me while I (she??) was reading the text aloud.After listening TO me for a while,she gave me a big smile and said she likeD(s) my voice very much.(The smile shone on the whole day and for several dayS.)Thanks to the smile.Ibegan to be confident.
总体不错，我的大写都是帮你改正或者添加的，括号里的是你原来的需要删去的。倒数第二句语法上没有什么大错，但是建议你删掉，因为是中国式思维，母语人士难以理解，而且和最后一句意思有所重复了。如果一定要表示你的震撼和深刻印象，建议改成that was the most beautiful and unforgettable smile I have ever seen, which still stays fresh in my memory)

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how nervously I was -how nervous I was
.I found it how diffcult to follow -.I found it so diffcult to follow
new school three year- new school three year s
total...

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how nervously I was -how nervous I was
.I found it how diffcult to follow -.I found it so diffcult to follow
new school three year- new school three year s
totally different as the lessons -totally different from the lessons
teacher came to me -teacher came across me
while she was reading the text aloud-while I was reading the text aloud
she was reading the text aloud-she was reading the text loudly
After listeningme for a while-After listening to me for a while
smile shone on the whole day - smile shone the whole day
and for several day-.. and for severa l day.s.
用空格隔开的是改的部分~

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1， nervously （nervous） 2，year（years ） 3，how 去掉 4，in (加上 the )first English class 5，that（which） was totally 6， while she（I） was reading 7，listening（加上to）me 8，she likes（liked） my voice 9，several day（days） 10，正确

year---years,
how...to---too...to ,
in去掉 ，
while she---while I
day---days
began---begin

1how 前加that
2 nervously---nervous
3year--years
4 how--too
5 as---with
6 said 后边加that
7day---days