高考英语作文修改II.Guided Writing:根据你现在学习的实际情况,谈谈您的高考志愿（college application）.你的作文必须包括以下内容.1.简要描述您的学习情况.2.你梦想进的大学.3.说明你可以考进梦

高考英语作文修改II.Guided Writing:根据你现在学习的实际情况,谈谈您的高考志愿（college application）.你的作文必须包括以下内容.1.简要描述您的学习情况.2.你梦想进的大学.3.说明你可以考进梦
高考英语作文修改
II.Guided Writing:根据你现在学习的实际情况,谈谈您的高考志愿（college application）.你的作文必须包括以下内容.1.简要描述您的学习情况.2.你梦想进的大学.3.说明你可以考进梦想大学的理由.As time goes by,i will attend the GaoKao in next year.Frankly speaking,i don't think i have any outstanding talent.My studying is in medium,and i haven't high ambition but self-knowledge.Have been considered for a long time,i decide to attend Shanghai Fisheries University .First of all ,score line of Shanghai Fisheries University is fit for me .Neither too high to me to losing my confidence,not too easy to me to losing my learning motivation .What's more,i prefer to learn knowledge which is about plants and animals rather than study boring book knowledge .Finally,nowadays more and more view on sea which contain large amount of resources,i believe that what i chosen will play a important role in the future.Maybe my choice in other eyes is not difficult and meaningless.However ,combined with my practice is the right choice for me.I hope i will success and not regret in the future 感觉完全写的离题了,修改下内容和语法结构之类的就行了,不抱希望

高考英语作文修改II.Guided Writing:根据你现在学习的实际情况,谈谈您的高考志愿（college application）.你的作文必须包括以下内容.1.简要描述您的学习情况.2.你梦想进的大学.3.说明你可以考进梦
高考应该是college entrance examination 吧
As time goes by,I will attend the college entrance examination next year(我觉得in去掉比较通顺).Frankly speaking,i don't think i have any outstanding talent. My study(ing去掉) is in medium, and i haven't high ambition but self-knowledge. Having（用ing形式） been considered much（j加个谓语much）for a long time, i decide to attend Shanghai Fisheries University. First of all , the (加个the) score line of Shanghai Fisheries University is suitable for me. The score line will be neither too high for me to lose my confidence, nor too easy for me to lose(前面的to属于不定时,后面的lose不用加ing,用原型就可以了) my learning motivation. What's more,i prefer to learn knowledge which is about plants and animals rather than study boring book knowledge. What's more,i prefer to learn knowledge which is about plants and animals rather than study boring book knowledge. Finally, more and more views on sea contain large amount of resources nowadays, soi believe that what i choose(这里用原型就可以了) will play an（后面单词I开头要用an） important role in the future. Maybe my choice in others'(别人的,所以复数others加‘表示别人的) eyes is easy and meaningless.However ,combined with my practice,(这里句子语法错误,需要断开)what I choose is the right choice for me.I hope i will success and not regret it（regret是及物动词,后面要加宾语） in the future.
作文最好三段论,结尾有个总结,可以把最后一句作为最后一段.